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Assassin_of_Verse
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On the spot free verse 1


Morphine drip.
Pain drop killer.
A serial stamped on the stone-white pillar.

Hospital wall, cold rolled floor.
A cyclops' cave seems less lonesome.

Framed photos, half-flated balloons.
Reminders of unfufilled filialities.

Nurse in. Nurse out. Scribbles on the clipboard.
Nothing to do; sobered and so bored.

Keyboard a knock away, but power plug a door aside.
The TV never seemed so remoteless.
Hopeless.
Dopeless.

But the curtain moves on next door.
One patient covered,
way too many more.


10/4/09
11:29 PM - 11:40 PM
© Copyright 2009 Andrew - All Rights Reserved
priyanka
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1 posted 10-05-2009 05:18 PM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

aww...dats just so sad ...
these realities of life
they hit so bad

nice write...
liked it
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2 posted 10-05-2009 07:09 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

Wow, I really love this.
Fantastic write.

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Assassin_of_Verse
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3 posted 10-05-2009 09:06 PM       View Profile for Assassin_of_Verse   Email Assassin_of_Verse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Assassin_of_Verse

priyanka: thank you for your words. However, in case you don't know, not all of my writing reflects my current state. Lol, it just happened to pop into my head during those ten minutes. (But yeah, it was sad.)

Forever Broken: Lol, thanks for considering, but it was just on the spot. ^_^'

There is power in the pen.

priyanka
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4 posted 10-06-2009 11:16 AM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

I did understand then...
But just that it happens all the time...
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5 posted 10-06-2009 02:35 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

Hit Hard.. love this poem
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6 posted 10-06-2009 06:45 PM       View Profile for Assassin_of_Verse   Email Assassin_of_Verse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Assassin_of_Verse

Ah, I see. My bad then! XD

Haha, thanks Krysti. That's what I aim for.

There is power in the pen.

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7 posted 10-10-2009 08:01 AM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

lol!! your just too good anyways!
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