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May I have more acorns please?

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LoveAbounds
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0 posted 10-03-2009 10:24 PM       View Profile for LoveAbounds   Email LoveAbounds   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveAbounds

acorn, where is the other guy?
I don't know. The squirrel must have eaten him.
Oh, what does he look like.
It's not a he. But she looks like you.
Really?
Indeed.
Hey, I know where your friend is?
Where?
Enter my mouth and I will carry him to you.
Okydoke.
mmmh. That was a scrumptious acorn.

Feedback please.

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priyanka
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1 posted 10-04-2009 06:22 PM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

hmm nice one...
acorn huh?
what's with the comparison?
Assassin_of_Verse
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2 posted 10-04-2009 10:38 PM       View Profile for Assassin_of_Verse   Email Assassin_of_Verse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Assassin_of_Verse

HAHA, nice.

There is power in the pen.

 
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