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freeand2sexy
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0 posted 2009-10-03 09:45 PM



Peace drips down
Silver skies, slipping past
Uncertainty of last goodbyes,
Into the eyes, of eternal life,
Unto a kingdom,
Rejoicing in the return
Of His child,

For after 91 years,
She's finally home.

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

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priyanka
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since 2009-06-15
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india
1 posted 2009-10-04 06:25 PM


"For after 91 years,
She's finally home"

liked that best...
knowing that no matter what, someday we still get to go home...

inspiring...

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2 posted 2009-10-04 08:01 PM


Great as always

-Zach

freeand2sexy
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3 posted 2009-10-05 09:52 PM


Thanks!

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

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