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Surrender

Addition submission a beauty so obscene
Attraction distraction frenetically serene
Collision division chaotic past elite
Fictional conviction while swaying inside the beat
Elation frustration barriers thin and strong
Devotion a notion devoid of right or wrong
Connection recollection with the smell of cigarettes
Inflection tension plays like Russian roulette
Friction addiction climax in disguise
Emission submission in choosing her demise.
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1 posted 10-02-2009 05:26 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

WOAH THIS WAS GREAT
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Short and powerful. (Lol, sounds like I'm describing myself...)

Anyway, well done! Loved how you included not just one rhyme per pair of sentences, but two! Library!

There is power in the pen.

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Assassin- Thankyou!! (I also am short and powerful, and enjoy it immensely.)
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wow! fantastic
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priyanka-- Muchas Gracias!
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6 posted 10-03-2011 06:47 PM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

How do you manage to write such a wonderful piece! I'm reading it back all over again and I'm awestruck!Again!
 
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