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Leanne <3
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Do u remember the times
That  you so calmly struck my face?
Threw me to the ground,
In my own disgrace.

Perhaps you have forgotten
How your words ripped through my skin,
Dug their way to my heart,
And began this war within.

To you its all in the past,
Buried with my pride
But for me it's not that simple,
To push the memories aside.

Yes you made me stronger
In much more than just one way.
But does that really justify
The price I had to pay?

Inside this exterior, over which the eye might have roved there was the record of a pulsing life, which had learnt too well for its years Thomas Har

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1 posted 10-02-2009 05:24 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

wow Leanne its been awhile i loved this a lot!!!
Krysti
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thanks for the feedback krysti, i know i havent posted in ages just been getting so caught up in everything and had a bit of a creative block, hopefully it comes back to me soon
-Lee
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very smooth rhyming~~
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