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XxForever.BrokenxX
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0 posted 09-30-2009 10:56 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

Yes, I know the rhyming is off but I don't really care.
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You know you always put me down,
I always feel so broken.
Is there no such thing as hospitality,
Or have you taken that too?

I can't run from you,
I can't ever hide,
These feelings will stick,
after all, you're in my mind.

Can't I at least get a break,
or some time to breathe?
You've destroyed everything.
All my happy endings.

Give up your way,
It would help me out a lot.
Please, don't stay.
I can't stand it anymore.

Get out of my head and leave me to live.
I don't want to hear you screaming anymore.

{~~*~~}


EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
...popsicle!

[This message has been edited by XxForever.BrokenxX (10-01-2009 09:46 PM).]

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1 posted 10-02-2009 01:06 AM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

Em, I loved this!!!
Krysti
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2 posted 10-03-2009 07:16 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Love it Emmalee. Haven't heard from ya in a while. Whats up? :]
XxForever.BrokenxX
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3 posted 10-04-2009 07:03 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

Hey, thanks for reading.
There's not a whole lot going on, just the usually craziness. I just got home from the second rehearsal weekend of CMYC (Central Manitoba Youth Choir) so im pretty tired, but ya know..

Thanks again for reading.

{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
...popsicle!

maddorani
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4 posted 04-21-2011 07:40 PM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for maddorani

i loved it
XxForever.BrokenxX
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5 posted 05-08-2011 11:29 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

=] Thank you.

{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

*tori_rose*
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6 posted 07-06-2011 10:13 PM       View Profile for *tori_rose*   Email *tori_rose*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *tori_rose*

i love this an can truly relate

~*tori*~

XxForever.BrokenxX
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7 posted 07-09-2011 01:38 AM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

thank you =). though im sorry that you can relate. It wasn't a part of my life that was enjoyable and im sure you feel the same.

You'll be in my thoughts. =)

{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

theladypoet21
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8 posted 09-13-2011 07:41 PM       View Profile for theladypoet21   Email theladypoet21   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for theladypoet21

This was a great poem, although sad, I can relate.
priyanka
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9 posted 10-03-2011 08:23 PM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

Loved it!! Love your choice of words-
I don't want to hear you screaming anymore.!
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