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Assassin_of_Verse
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Don't you like Lemonade?


Would you stop flipping me?
I'm not some pancake.
And enough with the trampling:
There are prettier stepping stones.

You keep your cake and claim another's:
So sweet, its sickening.

In fact, if everybody was as sweet as you,
there'd be no diabetes.

Then again, what's life without sweet things?
(I remember a funeral home matching your scent.)

And so what if I'm small and yellow?
Maybe less sweet than sour?

It wasn't fair to squeeze once,
than drop me like life gave you lemons.

But its understandable;
friends don't match your tastes.
© Copyright 2009 Andrew - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-02-2009 01:05 AM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

Andrew!!!!1 oh my how i have always loved your imagery.. very nicely put. library
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2 posted 10-04-2009 10:50 PM       View Profile for Assassin_of_Verse   Email Assassin_of_Verse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Assassin_of_Verse

Haha, thanks Krysti! I just wish I had the talent to illustrate my poems.

There is power in the pen.

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3 posted 10-06-2009 04:09 PM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

Good one...
Mmmm....lemonade... slurp..!!

vivid...
liked it...different too
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4 posted 10-07-2009 06:49 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

I liked the idea you had with this. I'm not as creative as you to come up with original material. But good job over all.

-Zach
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