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Clockwork_Orange
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0 posted 09-29-2009 12:05 PM       View Profile for Clockwork_Orange   Email Clockwork_Orange   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Clockwork_Orange's Home Page   View IP for Clockwork_Orange


i want to punch
i want to scream
until i start to see
a bit of red peeking undernieth

i want to make sure you all know
that if you want to fight, then baby lets go

ill tear you up
and that isnt a lie
it just me
i was born to fight
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Octave
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1 posted 09-30-2009 03:19 PM       View Profile for Octave   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Octave

I quite liked this. The word 'peeking' kind of threw me. I don't know, it just seems like quite a quiet almost playful word. Maybe that's just me.
The ending packed a punch [no pun intended]. Really liked this.
Assassin_of_Verse
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2 posted 09-30-2009 08:55 PM       View Profile for Assassin_of_Verse   Email Assassin_of_Verse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Assassin_of_Verse

I'm similar, but with words. (Though I don't mind getting physical.)

There is power in the pen.

priyanka
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3 posted 10-06-2009 04:06 PM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

aah...yes...fighting huh?
nice!
 
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