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in the library we meet/ or if someone has a good title make suggestions plz

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maddorani
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In the library
I came up to you
We started a
Conversation
We made
eye contact
But when
We stopped
talking
You just
Kept on
Staring at me
I stared back at
You
Looking deeply
Into your brown
Chocolate eyes
It seemed like
I was melting away
But I had to break
The reticence away
Because it made me
Feel timorous
My heart just
Palpitating away
The way our hands
Touched unexpectedly
The way you stared at me
Made me feel apprehensive
It was just both of us together
People mistook us for a couple
And I even got more shy
It felt inconvenient
It felt uncomfortable
But now these feelings
Are perplexed
And inexplicable
To comprehend
Its rigorous
To constrain
Since I donít
Know what im feeling
Inside
But all I know is that
This was the best moment
I ever had with you

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Visual Conflict?
Overflowing Stare?

I dunno what to call it other than amazing, gifted, perfect, and did I say amazing?
maddorani
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thankk u
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