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On the Rebound
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On the Rebound |
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precious pearls Member
since 2009-07-24
Posts 110NJ; United States |
On the Rebound It hurt to know that you didn’t really like me Did you really see beauty In me and my personality? Or was it just another ploy to get my cookie You used to end every text with “Beautiful” Now I realize that you only wanted the wrong things from me... You only gave me a sample Of what you gave her I cry these hazel Eyes of mine Every time I think about what could have happened If I hadn’t shown her proof.... Did you know we were friends? Did you know that you almost destroyed that? You would’ve sat there and let our friendship turn to fragments You would’ve watched it blow up in oblivion Just so you could still keep her And not be the one she was mad at You two broke up Then you got with me While we were together You got back with her O somebody, tell me what I did so wrong To allow you to not only Take away my dignity and integrity But for you to hurt her like that By playing the player Why in God’s name would you do that, You disgusting creature!? When I found out That you were with her while with me I was hurt More than anyone can imagine Though I didn’t let it show I felt like worthless, humiliated dirt But what really got me angry Was that you lied And pretended like you cared When all you wanted to do was stick your thing inside I asked you who you wanted to be with Your answer was if things didn’t work out between you two That you and me could be with one another But if you two did pull through As a couple you would have to say goodbye To us This is the one thing that you told me That I’m sure of wasn’t a lie And that in itself is one of the main reasons why I cry All throughout our relationship You were very promiscuous and smitten Of course I’m only human A naive, insecure teenage girl at that You played on my emotions With flattery and compliments.... Was it all true? Or was it just more lies from you? I broke it off I was not going to be the other woman The one in the closet I refused with all my heart To be your backside girl And then for you to ignore Me as soon as someone walks in the door But when she found out She didn’t believe me I told you to tell her That we had been together But you denied the whole thing I was so upset that I started shouting and cursing Profanities and unmentionables at you And you deserved every one of them too I made one thing clear that day To her and to you For me to go out With a friend’s boyfriend or ex Is not what I’m about I’d rather be hurt a hundred times By every man on this planet Than to take someone who isn’t mine That belongs to a friend Even though you guys are still together to this day I’ve moved on after time I still don’t think you deserve her But that’s her choice, not mine Even though it took me a while to figure it out I realize that I deserve somebody Who’s made just for me And fits my own perfect design [ I wrote this poem because I hope it'll help other girls know that they're not the only ones out there... i remember how it felt to b the girl on the rebound so i know how much it can hurt.... tell me what you think  ] |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
i loved it even though i didnt have that problem but my freinds had those kinds of problems i only liked them but i never had a boyfreind so yea but i can understand your pain and agony |
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priyanka Member
since 2009-06-15
Posts 216india |
"than to take someone who isn't mine" what a constructive thought... a beautiful thought too... wish everyone felt that way the world would be such a beautiful place... nice write loved it! u put accross your thoughts sooo well... |
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precious pearls Member
since 2009-07-24
Posts 110NJ; United States |
Awww thanks priyanka! i'm tearin up now! ~tear tear~ the comment means more than I will ever say... |
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priyanka Member
since 2009-06-15
Posts 216india |
Looking back through the old posts and I'm thinking, what a gem this one is!! Honoured that it means so much to you. |
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