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Them, me and she

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madelyn
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0 posted 09-27-2009 07:06 AM       View Profile for madelyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for madelyn

I'm screaming at the top of my lungs
Yet all they hear is silence
I'm trying to be seen
Yet all they see is through me
I try to be nice
Yet all they see is mean
I try to be pretty
Yet all they see is ugly
I try to be normal
Yet all they see is weird
I try to be me
Yet all they see is not
I try to be something
Yet all they see is nothing
I try to be priceless
Yet all they see is worthless
I try to be irreplaceable
Yet all they see is replacable

I'm screaming at the top of my lungs
Yet all I hear is silence
I'm trying to be seen
Yet all I see is through me
I try to be nice
Yet all I see is mean
I try to be pretty
Yet all I see is ugly
I try to be normal
Yet all I see is weird
I try to be me
Yet all I see is not
I try to be something
Yet all I see is nothing
I try to be priceless
Yet all I see is worthless
I try to be irreplaceable
Yet all I see is replaceable

I'm screaming at the top of my lungs
All she hears is me
I'm trying to be seen
All she sees is me
I try to be nice
All she sees is nice
I try to be pretty
All she sees is perfection
I try to be normal
All she sees is unique
I try to be me
All she sees is me
I try to be something
All she sees is something
I try to be priceless
All she sees is priceless
I try to be irreplaceable
All she sees is a one-of-a-kind


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Ravagence
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since 08-16-2009
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1 posted 10-14-2009 07:35 PM       View Profile for Ravagence   Email Ravagence   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ravagence

Why this was ignored to the bottom of the page I don't know! You are an amazing poet(ess) and you deserve an applause to be able to write something like this! I have been trying to grasp an idea like this for months now and couldn't seem to come up with the same concept and you executed it better than I thought was possible! This made me feel like I just flew. I have been one of those people that look at people and think of them, that way, but then I was one of those people and I learned my lesson. I will take back all that I did to people badly in the past 14 years. Thanks.
loveyourself102
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since 10-11-2009
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2 posted 10-16-2009 01:07 AM       View Profile for loveyourself102   Email loveyourself102   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for loveyourself102

very nice i enjoyed ur poem
to bad i really dnt believe in love other wise i really enjoyed ur poem because it was well written
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