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Them, me and she
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Them, me and she |
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madelyn Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 172Purgatory |
I'm screaming at the top of my lungs Yet all they hear is silence I'm trying to be seen Yet all they see is through me I try to be nice Yet all they see is mean I try to be pretty Yet all they see is ugly I try to be normal Yet all they see is weird I try to be me Yet all they see is not I try to be something Yet all they see is nothing I try to be priceless Yet all they see is worthless I try to be irreplaceable Yet all they see is replacable I'm screaming at the top of my lungs Yet all I hear is silence I'm trying to be seen Yet all I see is through me I try to be nice Yet all I see is mean I try to be pretty Yet all I see is ugly I try to be normal Yet all I see is weird I try to be me Yet all I see is not I try to be something Yet all I see is nothing I try to be priceless Yet all I see is worthless I try to be irreplaceable Yet all I see is replaceable I'm screaming at the top of my lungs All she hears is me I'm trying to be seen All she sees is me I try to be nice All she sees is nice I try to be pretty All she sees is perfection I try to be normal All she sees is unique I try to be me All she sees is me I try to be something All she sees is something I try to be priceless All she sees is priceless I try to be irreplaceable All she sees is a one-of-a-kind |
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Ravagence Member
since 2009-08-16
Posts 79 |
Why this was ignored to the bottom of the page I don't know! You are an amazing poet(ess) and you deserve an applause to be able to write something like this! I have been trying to grasp an idea like this for months now and couldn't seem to come up with the same concept and you executed it better than I thought was possible! This made me feel like I just flew. I have been one of those people that look at people and think of them, that way, but then I was one of those people and I learned my lesson. I will take back all that I did to people badly in the past 14 years. Thanks. |
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loveyourself102 Junior Member
since 2009-10-11
Posts 48 |
very nice i enjoyed ur poem to bad i really dnt believe in love other wise i really enjoyed ur poem because it was well written |
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