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maddorani
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since 11-18-2007
Posts 419
houston,tx


0 posted 09-26-2009 11:52 AM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for maddorani


You are
So ravishing
And charming
The way
You look
At me
Makes me
Feel all
Abashed
And I just
Look away
Because I
Get apprehensive
When you catch my
Eye
These feelings
Are
Rigorous  
To constrain
Your voice
Which is so
Deep and
Caressing
Makes my
Heart palpitate
It feels like its
Going to burst
Since thatís how
I feel when im
Only with you


byyy meee
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precious pearls
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since 07-24-2009
Posts 110
NJ; United States


1 posted 09-28-2009 09:37 PM       View Profile for precious pearls   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for precious pearls

"The Way You Make Me Feel" I think that would be a good title... great poem, though I'm not really into the 2-3 words per line kinda thing, but it still drew me in...

Always,
   Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

maddorani
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2 posted 09-28-2009 10:55 PM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for maddorani

thansk but i think your writing and other ppls writing is more mature than mine im using higher words and i believe i have improved but im still not satisfied with it because i dont think im that good

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