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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
You are So ravishing And charming The way You look At me Makes me Feel all Abashed And I just Look away Because I Get apprehensive When you catch my Eye These feelings Are Rigorous To constrain Your voice Which is so Deep and Caressing Makes my Heart palpitate It feels like its Going to burst Since that’s how I feel when im Only with you byyy meee |
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precious pearls Member
since 2009-07-24
Posts 110NJ; United States |
"The Way You Make Me Feel" I think that would be a good title... great poem, though I'm not really into the 2-3 words per line kinda thing, but it still drew me in... Always, |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
thansk  but i think your writing and other ppls writing is more mature than mine im using higher words and i believe i have improved but im still not satisfied with it because i dont think im that goodmaddorani |
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