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maddorani
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0 posted 09-26-2009 11:51 AM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for maddorani


You are inside of my heart
You are inside my memories
Just thinking about you
Is killing me inside
It feels
Like thorns
Pricking
My heart
The
Memories
That I had
With you
Are unforgettable
But thinking
About all this
Makes me feel
Aggravated
Makes me
Feel
inexpressive
Because
I really
Want you
I just
donít know
What to do
Your face
Is in my mind
Your nice
Sweet caring voice
Rings through my ears
Slowly day by day
You are killing me
Inside
But you just donít
Notice it
How my heart
Is thirsty
Just to be with you
You are inside of my heart
You are inside my memories
Just thinking about you
Is killing me inside
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priyanka
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since 06-15-2009
Posts 212
india


1 posted 09-26-2009 05:29 PM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

Really nice poem... expressive
I can really understand what you mean...
The worst part is that there is nothing you can do about it...
maddorani
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since 11-18-2007
Posts 419
houston,tx


2 posted 09-26-2009 08:41 PM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for maddorani

yea i knooow i liked ppl no one liked mee i read some of ur poems too and they are really good i mean i could never write like that these ppl write way better than me thats what i think. in the future i want to be a poet/writer from ur name i think that ur a indian right my name is madiha nice ot meet you
madelyn
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since 09-03-2009
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3 posted 09-27-2009 06:38 AM       View Profile for madelyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for madelyn

High level of skill... good read.

Looking forward for more poems of this standard.

Keep writing

M
maddorani
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houston,tx


4 posted 09-27-2009 01:16 PM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for maddorani

thanksss
priyanka
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5 posted 10-03-2011 07:07 PM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

Hello Madiha   nice to meet you too. I'm sorry for replying so late, but I saw you post just today. Have been away since a while. Thank you, glad you liked my poems. Your style of writing is really good. I'm sure you'll suceed in being just that- A good poet/writer.And yes I'm from India  
maddorani
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6 posted 10-03-2011 07:22 PM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for maddorani

no problem i have written some new ones recently in the dark poetry and teen poetry i hope tht you will enjoy them thats cool that you are from india
priyanka
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7 posted 10-03-2011 07:50 PM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

Looking at them now actually! So have you ever visited India?
maddorani
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8 posted 10-03-2011 08:10 PM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for maddorani

no not really but i know ppl from there hehe
priyanka
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9 posted 10-03-2011 09:05 PM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

Oh okay, thats nice!
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