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Godforsaken Smile

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UNTAMEDelegance
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0 posted 09-24-2009 05:06 PM       View Profile for UNTAMEDelegance   Email UNTAMEDelegance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for UNTAMEDelegance

I'm sitting here in silence
and looking at the sky.
Promising and vowing that
tomorrow I won't lie.

That I won't deceive them
and take them for a spin
with my stupid need to hide  
behind that godforsaken grin.

I'm so tired of being
the girl that never cries.
The one that's always happy
behind her pain-filled eyes.

So I'm vowing now to tell the truth
still knowing all the while,
when morning comes I'll meet my fate
with that godforsaken smile.

[This message has been edited by UNTAMEDelegance (09-25-2009 11:01 AM).]

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RevengeIsMine
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1 posted 09-24-2009 09:19 PM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

You have no idea how much i feel like this right now.. Right now i'm crying.. but i know as soon as i see somebody walking towards the front door I'll stop crying.. i'll smile i'll be nice.. I'll be the girl everybody loves.. But when they go again the pain just gets a little to much to bare.. and i'll cry again..
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2 posted 09-26-2009 03:20 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

i think everyone goes through this at one point of time.. love the feeling portrayed in this poem
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nehematala
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3 posted 10-21-2009 05:17 PM       View Profile for nehematala   Email nehematala   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nehematala

Haylee labeled me as the one that always smiles and I realized how true that is... even with every thing going on right now I'm still smiling...
just remember you don't have to hide behind that smile around me I can see right through it

Loves
Michy
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4 posted 08-28-2010 10:31 PM       View Profile for WanderingWillow   Email WanderingWillow   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for WanderingWillow

Michy, you are always smiling, and I admire that so much, the both of you.
*tori_rose*
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5 posted 10-13-2010 11:57 AM       View Profile for *tori_rose*   Email *tori_rose*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *tori_rose*

i know exactly how that goes oh to well. i am like that myself i keep all of my feelings inside untill no one is around i have so many things going through my head that no one knows about i will help freinds when they cry but have yet to learn how to show my own feelings ......

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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6 posted 11-02-2010 04:31 PM       View Profile for s1nfully_1nn0c3nt   Email s1nfully_1nn0c3nt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit s1nfully_1nn0c3nt's Home Page   View IP for s1nfully_1nn0c3nt

So much emotion in this piece. D#$@ that smile eh? Enjoyed This.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

animecrazy71
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7 posted 11-02-2010 06:15 PM       View Profile for animecrazy71   Email animecrazy71   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit animecrazy71's Home Page   View IP for animecrazy71

A very beautiful poem i really liked it, i could feel what you were going through...

Check out my Poetry Blog for interesting Poems on http://arslan-poetry-blog.blogspot.com

XGarapanX
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8 posted 01-05-2011 09:19 PM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

Beautiful and very telling. I love your natural excellence.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

XGarapanX
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9 posted 01-05-2011 10:36 PM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

Hmm... Thought I commented on this one. Anyway, it's superb!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

FloraScars
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10 posted 03-08-2011 03:48 PM       View Profile for FloraScars   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for FloraScars

this poem is great. its probably how many feel.
i know its how i tend to feel
the one who never cries.
the one who seems to always be happy because you hide your pain with a smirk.
yeah i do that alot. i think many of us do.
 
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