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My Shattered Heart

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madelyn
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since 09-03-2009
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Purgatory


0 posted 09-21-2009 05:33 AM       View Profile for madelyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for madelyn

Please note~ This is about my best friend stabbing me in the back not about suicide.

What the hell
Did you do
To my heart?

It once beat freely
Free as a humming bird

It once was warm
Warm even in ice

It once loved everything
Loved even the face of hatred

It was beautiful
Even when it tried
To be ugly

It once glowed
Pink and cute

Now it’s dead
Black and blue and red
From where you punctured it

Now it is ugly
Even when it tries to be pretty

Now it is cold
Colder than ice

Now it’s stopped dead
Silence fills my chest

Why the hell
Would you do this
To some you loved?

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Ravagence
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since 08-16-2009
Posts 79


1 posted 09-25-2009 03:38 PM       View Profile for Ravagence   Email Ravagence   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ravagence

Although I'm quite hot today, your beautiful, artistic, amazing piece has managed to send shivers down my back. No matter how many times I read it I get the same feeling, like the words are what now contains your anger. I love your work. I really want to read more like this.
priyanka
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since 06-15-2009
Posts 212
india


2 posted 09-26-2009 05:39 PM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

Nice one...
I liked the part
"What the hell did you do to my heart?"
"It was once warm
warm even in ice"

I liked it a lot...

This back stabbing makes it so hard to trust someone!
maddorani
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since 11-18-2007
Posts 419
houston,tx


3 posted 03-11-2011 06:08 PM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for maddorani

i liked it alot keep up the good work
XGarapanX
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since 06-19-2008
Posts 1416
Rekjavik Iceland


4 posted 03-22-2011 02:52 PM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

Love it.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

frencesmae
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since 01-07-2011
Posts 9
philippines


5 posted 03-29-2011 05:16 AM       View Profile for frencesmae   Email frencesmae   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for frencesmae

good poem
 
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