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madelyn
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Purgatory


0 posted 09-21-2009 05:22 AM       View Profile for madelyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for madelyn

You tore it out
Your fingers are bloody
You almost killed me
You froze it
Turned it ice blue
You took out
A pair of scissors
And
You cut
It up into
Tiny
Pieces
You turned it
Black
With hatred
You tossed it in the bin
And told me
Don't worry,
It was worthless anyway

So I stand up wipe away the tears
And pick up the broken shards of my heart

You were my reason
To keep going back
To that awful place

But as you said it was worthless…

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precious pearls
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since 07-24-2009
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1 posted 09-21-2009 09:23 PM       View Profile for precious pearls   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for precious pearls

I loved it! I especially loved at the end how u said "But you said it was worthless" it stood out because I could see that it really bothered you that he said that.... that that was one of the main things that stuck with you, even now!
**tear tear** fantastic job and know that your heart is NOT worthless!

Always,
   Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

XxForever.BrokenxX
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Neverland


2 posted 09-21-2009 10:26 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

Wow, great write!

library.


{~~*~~}

Lacrimosa Dies Illa
[Oh that tearful day]
    {~~*~~}

madelyn
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3 posted 09-22-2009 06:22 AM       View Profile for madelyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for madelyn

It isnt a he its a she.
She was my best friend.
But... um yeah.
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


4 posted 09-22-2009 06:36 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

madelyn, a love how you use those meaningful quotes in your writing

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