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XxForever.BrokenxX
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0 posted 09-20-2009 08:44 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX


Dear Daddy,
I just want you to know,
I don't blame you.
I don't think this is all your fault.
And I know you love me too.

But Daddy you make me sad,
We're so much alike you know,
I'm not a thing like Mom..
at least I wish I wasn't.

I know you're hurting too,
and I can feel your pain.
But we'll always be together,
even when you're far away.

I know the choice you made was good,
so why can't I stop the tears?
Daddy I'm just a little confused,
why now, after all these years?

I just can't stand knowing
that you go through as much as me.
It hurts so much to know
you feel you wont ever be free.


{~~*~~}


Lacrimosa Dies Illa
[Oh that tearful day]
    {~~*~~}

[This message has been edited by XxForever.BrokenxX (09-21-2009 08:33 PM).]

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RevengeIsMine
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1 posted 09-21-2009 02:29 AM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

WOW!.. i feel this soo much atm... i really do..
XxForever.BrokenxX
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2 posted 09-21-2009 10:39 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

I'm glad you can relate.
Thanks for reading hun

{~~*~~}

Lacrimosa Dies Illa
[Oh that tearful day]
    {~~*~~}

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3 posted 09-22-2009 09:48 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Emily I just wanna go right through the screen and give you a massive hug. This was really good considering you don't usually rhyme.

-Zach
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4 posted 09-22-2009 11:11 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

Ha, thanks Zach.  

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
...popsicle!

 
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