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Angry as,

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Ravagence
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0 posted 09-20-2009 08:33 PM       View Profile for Ravagence   Email Ravagence   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ravagence

We live in a world where dark prevails
over light.
Where
the badguy wins.

We let satan use us
like dolls.
And we stray from
God; like a dog on a leash.

We should stand up,
and belt out to the
world:
"I'm angry as ****! And I will not let this go!"

..Free verse..
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Assassin_of_Verse
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1 posted 10-04-2009 10:48 PM       View Profile for Assassin_of_Verse   Email Assassin_of_Verse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Assassin_of_Verse

Provacative. I like the emotion and the last couple of lines.

There is power in the pen.

priyanka
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since 06-15-2009
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2 posted 10-06-2009 11:46 AM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

I strongly agree...
I like the last lines too!!
Just too good
 
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