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Someday Soon (Broken Dream's)

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RevengeIsMine
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Tell Me Who I Am These Days
Because I Have No Idea
All These Jaded Apprehensions
Are After All What Brought Me Here

All My Dreams And Wishes
They're Long Gone Out The Door
I'm Fighting Back These Deadly Tears
While I'm Lying On This Floor

The Truth Is That I'm Crumbling
These Scar's, Too Hard To Wear
I'm Trying So Hard To Find Myself
But You Don't Really Care

This All Too Much For Me
Trapped And Broken By These Dreams
Living The Life You Wanted
I Fall On Bended Knees

Someday Soon I'll Fight Again
But For Now I'll Sit Here Crying
Tell Me Why Is Life So Hard
And Why Do We Die Trying?
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1 posted 09-17-2009 12:26 AM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

awww beautiful jess real beautiful
Krysti
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Aww Krysti.. This is why i love you!!.. Cause u always make me feel spesh!!
HersheyKiss
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Jess...love it as usual and of course wonderfully written

Dani
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4 posted 09-19-2009 08:40 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Wonderfully written. I miss you gurl!

-Zach
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  I'll catch you Jess. You can talk to me any time you need to.

love you.

{~~*~~}

Lacrimosa Dies Illa
[Oh that tearful day]
    {~~*~~}

maddorani
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i love  ittt
priyanka
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7 posted 10-06-2009 11:43 AM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

Aww...such a beautiful poem...

"Someday Soon I'll Fight Again
But For Now I'll Sit Here Crying
Tell Me Why Is Life So Hard
And Why Do We Die Trying?"

So real...wish somone knew!
Assassin_of_Verse
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8 posted 10-08-2009 02:27 AM       View Profile for Assassin_of_Verse   Email Assassin_of_Verse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Assassin_of_Verse

"Tell Me Who I Am These Days
Because I Have No Idea
All These Jaded Apprehensions
Are After All What Brought Me Here"

Just beautiful. Especially the third line: "All These Jaded Apprehensions". I love the imagery there. Also, I like how every word was capitalized. It had a profound effect on how I read the poem (made me go back and read it several more times).

There is power in the pen.

 
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