Someday Soon (Broken Dream's)

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Teen Poetry #9

Someday Soon (Broken Dream's)

RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2009-09-16 05:11 AM

Tell Me Who I Am These Days
Because I Have No Idea
All These Jaded Apprehensions
Are After All What Brought Me Here

All My Dreams And Wishes
They're Long Gone Out The Door
I'm Fighting Back These Deadly Tears
While I'm Lying On This Floor

The Truth Is That I'm Crumbling
These Scar's, Too Hard To Wear
I'm Trying So Hard To Find Myself
But You Don't Really Care

This All Too Much For Me
Trapped And Broken By These Dreams
Living The Life You Wanted
I Fall On Bended Knees

Someday Soon I'll Fight Again
But For Now I'll Sit Here Crying
Tell Me Why Is Life So Hard
And Why Do We Die Trying?

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2009-09-17 12:26 PM

awww beautiful jess real beautiful
Krysti

RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

2 posted 2009-09-17 12:30 PM

Aww Krysti.. This is why i love you!!.. Cause u always make me feel spesh!!

HersheyKiss
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since 2008-06-02

Posts 137
New Jersey

3 posted 2009-09-17 08:53 PM

Jess...love it as usual and of course wonderfully written

Dani

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

4 posted 2009-09-19 08:40 AM

Wonderfully written. I miss you gurl!

-Zach

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

5 posted 2009-09-20 08:03 PM

I'll catch you Jess. You can talk to me any time you need to.

love you.

{~~*~~}

Lacrimosa Dies Illa
[Oh that tearful day]
{~~*~~}

maddorani
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since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

6 posted 2009-09-26 11:53 AM

i love ittt

priyanka
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since 2009-06-15

Posts 216
india

7 posted 2009-10-06 11:43 AM

Aww...such a beautiful poem...

"Someday Soon I'll Fight Again
But For Now I'll Sit Here Crying
Tell Me Why Is Life So Hard
And Why Do We Die Trying?"

So real...wish somone knew!

Assassin_of_Verse
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since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

8 posted 2009-10-08 02:27 AM

"Tell Me Who I Am These Days
Because I Have No Idea
All These Jaded Apprehensions
Are After All What Brought Me Here"

Just beautiful. Especially the third line: "All These Jaded Apprehensions". I love the imagery there. Also, I like how every word was capitalized. It had a profound effect on how I read the poem (made me go back and read it several more times).

There is power in the pen.

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