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he tells me that im perfect
the girl he's been looking for
but he's to scared to commit
and i cant help but ask for more

i told him that i'd wait
until he could understand
i told him if he needed
i'd always lend a helping hand

he thinks im going to wreck him
and i think he'll break my heart
is there grounds to build a love
that was doomed from the start?

do you want to love me
i need to know right now
so i can learn to let you go
before i forget how...
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"he thinks im going to wreck him
and i think he'll break my heart
is there grounds to build a love
that was doomed from the start?

do you want to love me
i need to know right now
so i can learn to let you go
before i forget how..."


oh my god... THIS IS BRILLIANT Hun!!
Love this! Library.

-Zach
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thank you Zach
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I thought it was well written myself.


Beautifully captured.
 
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