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staring at my phone
expecting you would call
it still comes as a surprise
when i dont hear from you at all

you broke my heart in pieces
until i finally moved on
and then you come knocking
i havent seen you in too long

you beg for my forgiveness
swear you made a mistake
you dont know how im hurting
how much do you think i can take?

we used to wake up  at six together
i'd send you off with a lunchbox note
kiss you goodbye in my doorway
in my red silk housecoat

i brought up all the memories
and made you feel the way i had
what did you expect i'd do
did you think i woulnd't be mad?

you held me for awhile
i cried into your shoulder
i said you should go home
I moved on, got a little older

staring at my phone
hoping you wont call
as much as i loved you
you're no good for me at all

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Oh honey,

I know this all too well. It sucks. I know. But great poem anyway. Your poems always capture emotions so well.


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OMG ur back.. LOVE THIS.. such an awesome writer you are.
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i missed you Jess!!!!!!!!! im glad to be back!!!! you better still be writing lots to.... teen seems a bit dead.... now i remember when we had it BOOMing! lol
 
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