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Ravagence
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0 posted 09-13-2009 09:00 PM       View Profile for Ravagence   Email Ravagence   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ravagence


Flow

I look up and feel the rain on my face,
it tastes salty, like tears.
maybe it's from angels who are crying.

The drops trickling down my face,
Torching paths with their frigidity.
Calming me with their wholly composure.

I think of what my life might be as one of them,
Serene.
and Alone.

Alone until they collide,
they become one;
Stronger, and Bigger.

Only one could hope for a life as
Simple
as a raindropís.

Yet as we know it,
We crowd our lives,
trying to fight take shortcuts.

A raindrop does not however,
take these shortcuts,
it goes with the flow.

Colliding with obstacles,
it rolls around them,
with envious ease.

I wish I could do that,
let my worries flow
Away.
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freeand2sexy
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1 posted 09-22-2009 10:32 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Sometimes I wish my life could be as simple as a raindropís, but then simple would just get boring.

I really like this, keep writing!

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

priyanka
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since 06-15-2009
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2 posted 09-26-2009 05:48 PM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

Oh! how simple it would be!
nice one...
waiting for more
 
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