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Ravagence
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since 2009-08-16
Posts 79


0 posted 2009-09-13 09:00 PM



Flow

I look up and feel the rain on my face,
it tastes salty, like tears.
maybe it's from angels who are crying.

The drops trickling down my face,
Torching paths with their frigidity.
Calming me with their wholly composure.

I think of what my life might be as one of them,
Serene.
and Alone.

Alone until they collide,
they become one;
Stronger, and Bigger.

Only one could hope for a life as
Simple
as a raindrop’s.

Yet as we know it,
We crowd our lives,
trying to fight take shortcuts.

A raindrop does not however,
take these shortcuts,
it goes with the flow.

Colliding with obstacles,
it rolls around them,
with envious ease.

I wish I could do that,
let my worries flow
Away.

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freeand2sexy
Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
CA, USA
1 posted 2009-09-22 10:32 PM


Sometimes I wish my life could be as simple as a raindrop’s, but then simple would just get boring.

I really like this, keep writing!

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

priyanka
Member
since 2009-06-15
Posts 216
india
2 posted 2009-09-26 05:48 PM


Oh! how simple it would be!
nice one...
waiting for more

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