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precious pearls
Member

since 2009-07-24

Posts 110
NJ; United States

0 posted 2009-09-12 09:13 PM

(This poem I just made up, none of the things in this poem ever happened to me... tell me what you think)

From Love to Pain

I poured out my heart to you
You were the first person I ever let in
The first person to search within
Me
You were like my family
And in every single way
I trusted you more than I trusted myself as each day
Came to an end
And you spent time with me and became my best friend

How can the world have answers
To the questions I have?
Questions like, “why love seems to have no boundaries
Into a human heart?”
Questions like “how heartbreak can make it feel like its tearing your insides apart?”
What are the answers to these questions?
Where is the cure to the pain that I feel?
And when can I begin to heal?

You were there for me
When my own family
Wasn’t....
You were there for me
When I was crying and unhappy
You were there for me
When you hugged me to keep my insides together
You were there and seemed to make everything better

At first we were friends
But then we were more
And I came to depend
On you like a drug
I still remember how you used to make my heart soar

I still remember it when you spoke those three simple words
Words that made me feel whole and complete
The same words that allowed you to stop my heartbeat
And crush it into a million pieces
From the overwhelming love
To the crushing pain of sorrow
From “I love you”
To “I never want to see you again”
I’m on the brink of going insane

For those few words
That you spoke to me
Crushed my whole world
I have never felt this
Level of misery

I had never felt so
Obsessed
I have never felt so
Depressed
I have never known
Pain like this
I have never felt
So alone

Always,
Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

Ravagence
Member

since 2009-08-16

Posts 79

1 posted 2009-09-18 07:05 PM

"I still remember it when you spoke those three simple words
Words that made me feel whole and complete
The same words that allowed you to stop my heartbeat
And crush it into a million pieces
From the overwhelming love
To the crushing pain of sorrow
From “I love you”
To “I never want to see you again”
I’m on the brink of going insane"

This is the part that shocked me, I's so well written, that I got goosebumps just from reading it.

Excellent job, I love it, I know someone who had that happen to them.

precious pearls
Member

since 2009-07-24

Posts 110
NJ; United States

2 posted 2009-09-20 03:31 PM

Thanks i appreciate that ur the firs 1 2 comment- means a lot 2 me!
-Peace

priyanka
Member

since 2009-06-15

Posts 216
india

3 posted 2009-10-04 06:13 PM

good one... liked it...
and knowing that all this comes comes from imagination...
you've got real good talent...
keep it coming

Thick_Goddness_973
Junior Member

since 2009-10-25

Posts 13

4 posted 2009-10-25 04:38 PM

this is sooooo beautiful and i know i know where somwhere

asarosestoleherattention
Junior Member

since 2009-10-27

Posts 15
england

5 posted 2009-10-27 07:17 PM

very nice
good imagination if this has never happened to you.
well done.
you could go somewhere

x

natalie fairbrace ('r)
and she was the soul of the party,
until they knew her.

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