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The Crow

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Elias Nevermore
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0 posted 09-10-2009 10:22 PM       View Profile for Elias Nevermore   Email Elias Nevermore   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Elias Nevermore

In my head,
I am dead.
Shoot the crow,
back down again
into the hole
from where it sprang.

In my head,
My pain said,
"The crow remains".
Thus things return
to their old ways.
The black crow caws.

In my head,
Blood runs red.
Constant beatings
of both my heart
and fragile body
where crows roam free.

In my head,
crows are fed,
by the great sadness
that lays hidden
in the deepest hole
of my dark soul.

Feed them.
Leave them.
Free them... Freedom... Freedom.

Deny them their freedom,
and in turn deny myself.
For the crow is my child,
who shall forever dwell,
In my head.



"Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing,
Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortals ever dared to dream before;" -Edgar All
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Ravagence
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1 posted 09-21-2009 03:52 PM       View Profile for Ravagence   Email Ravagence   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ravagence

It's got a certain rhythm that I kind get out of my head ;D
priyanka
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2 posted 09-25-2009 12:25 PM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

nice one....really cant get it out of my head too....I keep on miming....
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