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Elias Nevermore
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The poor man lies beaten
having not eaten
for a week.

His pockets lay empty,
like so other many
of the poor.

The street is his domain,
laden with rain
and rats.

His clothes are muddied,
his face sullied.
No complaints.

Men died out there daily,
survive long rarely.
Cruel world.

But to him this is life,
and he will fight
to keep it.

"Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing,
Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortals ever dared to dream before;" -Edgar All

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1 posted 09-08-2009 02:40 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

This is quite good.  Thank you for sharing it.

Alison
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I got the chills,
Not the bad ones,
The good ones
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a very touchy subject not many people dare to go. loved how you went there. great way of portraying the meaning.
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