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Teen Poetry #9

Before afterlife

heartofsteel
Junior Member

since 2009-09-07

Posts 13
Oregon, USA

0 posted 2009-09-07 07:13 PM

Before afterlife

This secluded structure
Of non-existence
Traps me
From the realms
Of reality
The abyss
Of mortality

I am overwhelmed
In true darkness
Compelled
By blacks death grip

Suns absence has withdrawn
My abeam follow
Nothing guides
These clumsy wandering feet

When my soul is released
Where will I reside
To light in joy
Or depths of sorrow
Will I uncover sweet peace?

My heart craves
For a sense of being
Belonging

This is nothing
But imagination
Recreation

Lead me
Where I belong
Afterlife

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2009-09-10 07:57 PM

wow i loved the imagery in your poem. very well written. Welcome to Passions. great job on your 1st post.
hope to be reading more from you
Krysti

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