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Love_Skull
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Why do i remember
When all i want is to forget?
Why do i laugh
When all i want to do is cry?

Why do people act like they know me
When they are the ones who know the least?
Why do people call me different
When they just dont understand me?

Why do i hide
When i shouldnt be alone?
Why do i love
When all i do is get a broken heart?

Why do people talk
When all they should do is listen?
Why do people act like nothings wrong
When any second there life could change?

Why do i put a smile on my face
When i just want to run away from life?
Why do i act like nothing is wrong
When my life is crumbling to pieces?

Why does everything happen for a reason?
When that reason alters your life
Why does life have to end?
When a life is just beginning?

*not finished i just cant think of anything else right now*

By Leah Stonis
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1 posted 09-10-2009 08:40 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

i like this Leah. shares your thoughts very well
Krysti
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2 posted 10-05-2009 02:50 AM       View Profile for Assassin_of_Verse   Email Assassin_of_Verse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Assassin_of_Verse

I think most of the poem was a rant on how things are in your life.

HOWEVER: I think you really started to write as you inked down that last stanza! ARGH! I want to tear out my hear 'cause I want to know what you would've written!!! It really bugs me that you ended when it seemed like you were starting something incredibly obvious, yet special.

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS!

There is power in the pen.

 
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