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In the End

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Ravagence
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since 08-16-2009
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0 posted 08-28-2009 07:20 PM       View Profile for Ravagence   Email Ravagence   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ravagence

The world is being ripped apart
person by person,
country by country;
and guess what it's called?
War.

It's all about getting the gold.
Your parents tell you that it's just a game,
But they are playing for the #1 parent,
and in the end
someone
gets
  hurt:
You.

Across the sea,
there's a war.
We try to help,
but in the end,
someone
gets
  hurt:
Families.

On the global scale,
It's about who has the most land,
from ancient rome,
to the germans in World War 2.
And in the end,
someone
gets
  hurt:
Everbody.

Next time you hear about a war,
don't turn a blind eye,
don't gape with your mouth open,
don't even bother with the gossip.
Just pray.
And in the end
someone
gets
  hurt:
Satan.

____Separate Endings____

Next time you hear about a war,
don't turn a blind eye,
don't gape with your mouth open,
don't even bother with the gossip.
Just pray.
And in the end
someone
comes
  home.

+++OR+++

No ending Stanza at all.

::Attention::

Which Ending is best?
Thanks for Support
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Assassin_of_Verse
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since 10-23-2007
Posts 330
that So Cal


1 posted 10-08-2009 02:57 AM       View Profile for Assassin_of_Verse   Email Assassin_of_Verse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Assassin_of_Verse

My thoughts are: wars don't just exist elsewhere. However, its great that you look beyond the scope of where ever you may be.

As for the ending, I'd go with the second ending, or no ending at all.
Thanks for sharing!

There is power in the pen.

priyanka
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since 06-15-2009
Posts 212
india


2 posted 10-09-2009 11:49 AM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

"Sigh"
In the end someone does get hurt...

nice write...
 
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