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Teen Poetry #9

In the End

Ravagence
Member

since 2009-08-16

Posts 79

0 posted 2009-08-28 07:20 PM

The world is being ripped apart
person by person,
country by country;
and guess what it's called?
War.

It's all about getting the gold.
Your parents tell you that it's just a game,
But they are playing for the #1 parent,
and in the end
someone
gets
  hurt:
You.

Across the sea,
there's a war.
We try to help,
but in the end,
someone
gets
  hurt:
Families.

On the global scale,
It's about who has the most land,
from ancient rome,
to the germans in World War 2.
And in the end,
someone
gets
  hurt:
Everbody.

Next time you hear about a war,
don't turn a blind eye,
don't gape with your mouth open,
don't even bother with the gossip.
Just pray.
And in the end
someone
gets
  hurt:
Satan.

____Separate Endings____

Next time you hear about a war,
don't turn a blind eye,
don't gape with your mouth open,
don't even bother with the gossip.
Just pray.
And in the end
someone
comes
  home.

+++OR+++

No ending Stanza at all.

::Attention::

Which Ending is best?
Thanks for Support

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

1 posted 2009-10-08 02:57 AM

My thoughts are: wars don't just exist elsewhere. However, its great that you look beyond the scope of where ever you may be.

As for the ending, I'd go with the second ending, or no ending at all.
Thanks for sharing!

There is power in the pen.

priyanka
Member

since 2009-06-15

Posts 216
india

2 posted 2009-10-09 11:49 AM

"Sigh"
In the end someone does get hurt...

nice write...

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