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Writ_Upon_Emotion
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No Direction -

Stuck at a crossroads
Fuel tank full
Mileage is 20
But my car won't drive
Traffic is heavy
Lost site of my friends
How i wish i could fly
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Reminds me of the song "Float On" by Modest Mouse. I've felt that feeling where it's like your tethered to the ground, but your like a helium filled balloon and you want to fly away.
I really like short poems like this, It made my day.
 
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