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stacylynn418
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0 posted 08-23-2009 01:34 AM       View Profile for stacylynn418   Email stacylynn418   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stacylynn418

No, there's no life in this one.
Air fills her lungs
And blood is running through her veins,
But those eyes...
Look at those eyes.
Lifeless.
Apathy got the best of this one.
I don't think we can save her now.
No,
It's too late.
You can't save everyone.
This one...
This one can't feel you anyway.
God...look at those eyes.
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1 posted 09-21-2009 03:39 PM       View Profile for Ravagence   Email Ravagence   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ravagence

sent shivers up my spine..delightful(:
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