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When Autumn Falls

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XxForever.BrokenxX
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Neverland


0 posted 08-22-2009 03:27 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX



Stuck behind the glass,
screaming for any escape,
I can feel the tears running low.
I don't want to pretend again,
but I keep running in circles,
searching over and over for a way out.
Searching for a reason that will keep you.

I want to pretend a happy ending,
one where everything smiles.
But I can't live in my head forever,
My heart knows there's no stopping you.

So what do you do when autumn falls?
You can't run from winter.
{~~*~~}

Lacrimosa Dies Illa
[Oh that tearful day]
    {~~*~~}

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freeand2sexy
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1 posted 08-23-2009 12:55 AM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

I really like this! You ended the poem so well, too.

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

XxForever.BrokenxX
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2 posted 08-23-2009 01:12 AM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

Thanks, took me a while to think of how to word the ending so I'm glad you like it.


12:12, make a wish..


{~~*~~}
stacylynn418
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3 posted 08-23-2009 01:30 AM       View Profile for stacylynn418   Email stacylynn418   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stacylynn418

i think that this is a great poem. and i agree, you ended it really well.

"But I can't live in my head forever,
My heart knows there's no stopping you."
i love that part the most
brneyedgrly
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4 posted 08-23-2009 10:46 AM       View Profile for brneyedgrly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brneyedgrly


Loved your poem...the last two lines are awesome!

Good job  

.

flesh, blood, bone, love...twisted
~ L. Hall

XxForever.BrokenxX
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5 posted 08-24-2009 03:03 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

Thank you. I'm glad to hear it


{~~*~~}

Lacrimosa Dies Illa
[Oh that tearful day]
    {~~*~~}

Assassin_of_Verse
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that So Cal


6 posted 08-25-2009 12:17 AM       View Profile for Assassin_of_Verse   Email Assassin_of_Verse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Assassin_of_Verse

"I want to pretend a happy ending,
one where everything smiles."

God knows how many times I've tried something like that.
Great poem!

There is power in the pen.

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