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A Long Time Ago (Last Time I Checked)

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Ravagence
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0 posted 08-21-2009 01:33 PM       View Profile for Ravagence   Email Ravagence   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ravagence

A Long Time Ago (Last Time I Checked)

What are we doing now,
for love?

We used to give
mushy,
but sweet,
love poems;
and now we give into pleasure

and we entice each other
with
diamonds and gold

Last time I checked,
Love wasn't about looks.

Last time I checked,
Love wasn't about physical contact.

Last time I checked,
Love was about
heart
  passion
   devotion
and
a
    Spark.


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Clockwork_Orange
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since 03-23-2007
Posts 623
Space Camp, IN


1 posted 08-21-2009 05:24 PM       View Profile for Clockwork_Orange   Email Clockwork_Orange   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Clockwork_Orange's Home Page   View IP for Clockwork_Orange

i liked this alot. i enjoyed reading and hope to see more
freeand2sexy
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since 09-12-2008
Posts 703
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2 posted 08-23-2009 12:45 AM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

I thought this was pretty awesome and totally true!

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

Assassin_of_Verse
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since 10-23-2007
Posts 330
that So Cal


3 posted 08-25-2009 12:15 AM       View Profile for Assassin_of_Verse   Email Assassin_of_Verse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Assassin_of_Verse

Lol, sometimes, a spark can take a while...

There is power in the pen.

precious pearls
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since 07-24-2009
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4 posted 08-25-2009 03:42 PM       View Profile for precious pearls   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for precious pearls

I liked it.... very much. It showed your true feelings about the relationship in a way that made me think that you're getting frustrated with the condition of the relationship... it was very REAL is the word I'm looking for. You didn't use big words(not to me anyway) and that said to me that it came straight from within your heart. Good job!!!

Always,
   Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

Ravagence
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5 posted 08-26-2009 03:53 PM       View Profile for Ravagence   Email Ravagence   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ravagence

Thanks all of you
Writ_Upon_Emotion
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since 08-26-2009
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6 posted 08-26-2009 04:02 PM       View Profile for Writ_Upon_Emotion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Writ_Upon_Emotion

O The heartfelt pleasures of new found love, and how they quickly result into a need to keep one another happy.

I can take much from your words.

Thankyou
 
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