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Heartache

Salty tears of anguish ran down her red, blotchy cheeks
The empty hollow space in her heart never stopped hurting
As her mind kept shaking with misery and despair
Her whole body felt like it didnít want to go on
As her heartache never stopped...

The birds that sang their cheerful songs
They made it feel like she was in a world where she didnít belong
The clear blue, serene sky
Was the perfect reminder that life would go on without her
That he would go on without her
The cascading tears never stopped
As he left her standing all alone



(Note this does not have anything to do with me... I just wrote it for someone in a chatroom... lol... hope you like it)
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"The birds that sang their cheerful songs
They made it feel like she was in a world where she didnít belong
The clear blue, serene sky
Was the perfect reminder that life would go on without her"


Many feel this way at some point in their lives~~~ expressed nicely for your friend.
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"They made it feel like she was in a world where she didnít belong"

Exactly how I feel sometimes. Great write
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Yep, I do.

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