NJ; United States
I liked it... it was very emotional and you had a definite fervor to your words... The only thing is that I didn't get that last part.. you said "you better start walking
or you'll never make it" maybe i'm just having one of my moments and being thick, but i didn't get that... Otherwise, touching and passionate poem!! All of your stuff like that, you shud try getting them published too!
Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)