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Ravagence Member
since 2009-08-16
Posts 79 |
All Alone The grass is green, the sky blue, Days on days, I cared for you. Ashes and smoke, Fuming in the air, It's like they know my anger, Understanding every breeze they come to. Why do I have to write fancy love poems, JUST to impress you, get you to, make you, force you to, love me. My fuse is blown, The fire died, Now your all alone. [This message has been edited by Ravagence (08-17-2009 08:46 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"Why do I have to write fancy love poems, JUST to impress you, get you to, make you, force you to, love me."...the question should be why do you? And the answer is:You can't make or force anyone to love you~~~ p.s. this should beyou're instead of your all alone. M |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
She has a point. I'd ask the same question. But the poem was pretty good. I liked it.  |
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