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All Alone

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Ravagence
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0 posted 08-16-2009 07:15 PM       View Profile for Ravagence   Email Ravagence   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ravagence

All Alone

The grass is green,
the sky blue,
Days on days,
I cared for you.

Ashes and smoke,
Fuming in the air,
It's like they know my anger,
Understanding every breeze they come to.

Why do I have to write
  fancy
love poems,
JUST
to impress you,
get you to,
make you,
force you to,
love
me.

My fuse is blown,
The fire died,
Now your
  all
   alone.

[This message has been edited by Ravagence (08-17-2009 08:46 PM).]

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 08-22-2009 09:15 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

"Why do I have to write
  fancy
love poems,
JUST
to impress you,
get you to,
make you,
force you to,
love
me."...the question should be why do you?  And the answer is:You can't make or force anyone to love you~~~


p.s.  this should beyou're instead of your all alone.
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2 posted 08-22-2009 10:15 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

She has a point. I'd ask the same question.

But the poem was pretty good. I liked it.
 
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