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Peanutbuttercookies'nmilk
Junior Member
since 2009-05-03
Posts 31
Terrell,Texas

0 posted 2009-08-16 05:11 PM


All over the world-
Each day and night-
Violence is happening-
With all it's might.

People hurt people-
Without a care-
It's just not right-
It's just not fair.

Solving problems-
In a violent way-
Creates more problems-
That are sure to stay.

We all need to talk-
We don't need to fight-
Knives and guns-
Are just not right.

To stop the violence-
You need to stay cool-
Don't lose your temper-
Don't act like a fool.

If we all work together-
To make it cease-
We'll have no more violence-
We'll just have peace.

© Copyright 2009 Sacha Aurora Henderson - All Rights Reserved
precious pearls
Member
since 2009-07-24
Posts 110
NJ; United States
1 posted 2009-08-19 03:31 PM


I loved the message... if only people would listen... alas, that is not the way of the world. But the rhyming, pacing, and message were all great! Keep it up!!!

Always,
   Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

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