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Violence

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Peanutbuttercookies'nmilk
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since 05-03-2009
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0 posted 08-16-2009 05:11 PM       View Profile for Peanutbuttercookies'nmilk   Email Peanutbuttercookies'nmilk   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Peanutbuttercookies'nmilk

All over the world-
Each day and night-
Violence is happening-
With all it's might.

People hurt people-
Without a care-
It's just not right-
It's just not fair.

Solving problems-
In a violent way-
Creates more problems-
That are sure to stay.

We all need to talk-
We don't need to fight-
Knives and guns-
Are just not right.

To stop the violence-
You need to stay cool-
Don't lose your temper-
Don't act like a fool.

If we all work together-
To make it cease-
We'll have no more violence-
We'll just have peace.
© Copyright 2009 Sacha Aurora Henderson - All Rights Reserved
precious pearls
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since 07-24-2009
Posts 110
NJ; United States


1 posted 08-19-2009 03:31 PM       View Profile for precious pearls   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for precious pearls

I loved the message... if only people would listen... alas, that is not the way of the world. But the rhyming, pacing, and message were all great! Keep it up!!!

Always,
   Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

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