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Teen Poetry #9

I Am a Butterfly

This is Tamma
Junior Member

since 2009-07-31

Posts 15
Harpers Ferry wv

0 posted 2009-08-12 11:07 AM

four years ago,
i was described,
as a butterfly,
coming out of its cacoon.

two years of my life,
before that night,
i slowly lost myself,
the essence of who iam.

i got a tattoo,
of a butterfly,
on my shoulder,
to remind myself,
not to lose myself.

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

1 posted 2009-08-21 03:35 AM

Um, butterflies, from larva to pupae to adult, have a lifespan of about 1-3 years... XD

But seriously, though...It's good that u were described as such i guess. Saying that ur past the time of change and adolesonce (bad spelling) is pretty good. So in a sense, being a butterfly is not all that bad. It's pretty good actually.

Pretty short, but u put meaning in it, even if it seemed pretty personal (and self-explanatory). Good job!

There is power in the pen.

Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

2 posted 2009-08-21 09:26 AM

Well Done. Enjoy your tatoo.

Yoin

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