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Like a predator of the night
His eyes glow at the sight
Curiosity grows with delight
His victim for tonight.

He sticks close to the ground
His ears prickling with the sound
A need for the one his found
His got his next rebound.

He stalks her through the black
His senses leading to the snack
Too immersed to turn back
His ready for attack.

He pounces from behind
His urges all unwind
Adrenaline forcing him blind
He devours his new find.

Inside this exterior, over which the eye might have roved there was the record of a pulsing life, which had learnt too well for its years Thomas Har

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Much enjoyed, good work.
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very nice imagery.

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Thanks guys
 
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