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nehematala
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0 posted 08-09-2009 10:03 PM       View Profile for nehematala   Email nehematala   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for nehematala


He's sitting outside my window
Wondering what it will take
He's tried so many times already
But I won't come

I keep fighting him
I know there is more to my life
But I feel his presence everyday
He just won't go

This feeling of pure cold hatred
He's already taken so many I love
And now he's waiting
He wants me

I proved over and over
It won't be easy
But he keeps coming back
With lame attempts on me

Fighting this fate
I know he will eventually win
But I can't give in
Deaths waiting for me

The number one thing in acting is honesty: If you can fake that you've got it made.

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XxForever.BrokenxX
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1 posted 08-16-2009 01:46 AM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

wow, I really like this. Great write, I'm surprised nobody else has said anything.

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UNTAMEDelegance
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2 posted 08-19-2009 12:52 AM       View Profile for UNTAMEDelegance   Email UNTAMEDelegance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for UNTAMEDelegance

This is really good, michi! at first i was confues and thought it was about a certain someone that we don't like, but then i realized that it wasn't. It's hard to fight fate isn't it.                                           ~UNTAMEDelegance
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