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Remember, if you can recall,
how painfully you made me fall.
When I was humbly seeking peace,
you showed no sympathy at all.

The girl you are was once more sweet,
but then you rose up in conceit,
not knowing that in our discord,
you made our power incomplete.

In saying this, I may be wrong,
perhaps to me you donít belong,
but I believed since days of old,
and this belief of mine was strong,

that if together we would come,
and friends again would we become,
that having made our strengths complete,
all hindering would be undone.

Then we together could create,
for them that would appreciate,
the ministry we both believe,
would purge them of a painful fate.

"For God has not given us the spirit of fear, but of love, and of power, and of a sound mind." - 2 Timothy 1:7

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Nice poem. I liked it. Keep writing.

-Zach
 
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