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Talh1n0vl3v1tat10n
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0 posted 08-07-2009 09:18 AM       View Profile for Talh1n0vl3v1tat10n   Email Talh1n0vl3v1tat10n   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Talh1n0vl3v1tat10n

This is the beginning
The question is a problem a solution
A Questions as a solution
A solution as the answer to the problem
The solution a problem the solution a problem
Can you see through these trees?
This is a facade
Can you see that?
Theres no way around what we have become
Theres no way around the future
Change is Change
Just Change
no results
no happiness
no pain
change is change
I never thought id see your face
I never thought you'd come
I gave you all the signals
I gave you everything I had
And you returned the smile
You returned the smile
This isnt it
This isnt the end
Deeply colored water marks stretch the horizon
Upon dimly lit canyon hights we stand
Watching the sunset fade upon the skyline
As we stand upon the sky and look up at the ground
Forever is Forever
Forever is Today

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crimsonXnails
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dark/little/heavan.:*:.


1 posted 08-07-2009 03:02 PM       View Profile for crimsonXnails   Email crimsonXnails   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for crimsonXnails

the first stanza literally made me laugh! ur brilliance continues to astound me, i can't believe how friggin sweet this stuff is X) i don't know if you know, but you can use html (!) to put in blank lines and what not. this poem just seemed to be missing ur style... i like how you break it up!

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

Talh1n0vl3v1tat10n
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2 posted 08-09-2009 09:16 AM       View Profile for Talh1n0vl3v1tat10n   Email Talh1n0vl3v1tat10n   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Talh1n0vl3v1tat10n

i would break it up but i have no idea how to use html im stuck on it
crimsonXnails
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dark/little/heavan.:*:.


3 posted 08-09-2009 02:36 PM       View Profile for crimsonXnails   Email crimsonXnails   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for crimsonXnails

you can also just press enter.

like that.

it works too!

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

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