Up until now, I have made no genuine effort to understand any poetry other than the kind that flows the way I'm accustomed to. I am not accustomed to reading poems like yours, because it does not have the concrete rhythm I prefer. Nevertheless, to me it is a good poem now that I have taken the time to read and understand it. In addition to that, I like both the flow and the content.
Forgive me for my poor critique and reviewing skills. I have never done this before.
"For God has not given us the spirit of fear, but of love, and of power, and of a sound mind." - 2 Timothy 1:7