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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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0 posted 08-05-2009 01:52 PM       View Profile for N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet   Email N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet


Let it rain, let it pour
Oh forever more
Let it flood, soak to the core
I know that it is such a chore
Yet the kiss of life is oh so pleasing
The caress of life is oh so easing

So teach me your music, give me the beat
I'll keep up with song, so let us meet

Upon the mountain tops
We feel the rain drops
So gently kissing
Hold my hand tighter
My heart feels lighter
The sky turns brighter

Oh forever more,

Forever more.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." Oscar Wilde

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nehematala
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1 posted 08-05-2009 03:17 PM       View Profile for nehematala   Email nehematala   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nehematala

This is really good

I love the feel

The number one thing in acting is honesty: If you can fake that you've got it made.

Leanne <3
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2 posted 08-05-2009 09:17 PM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Leanne <3

it sounds so carefree, i love it!
N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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3 posted 08-06-2009 01:23 AM       View Profile for N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet   Email N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet

Thank you for the responses.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." Oscar Wilde

priyanka
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4 posted 10-04-2009 05:46 PM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

ah! so dreamy...so joyful...so carefree...
so picturesque too...
"forever more"
gets me dreaming...
priyanka
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5 posted 10-10-2009 04:42 PM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

Got me reading too!! again
N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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6 posted 10-14-2009 12:22 AM       View Profile for N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet   Email N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet

Sorry, didnt even check on these poems

Thank you so much!
precious pearls
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7 posted 11-11-2009 04:42 PM       View Profile for precious pearls   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for precious pearls

beautiful!!! made me feel all lovey dovey inside lol
great poem

Always,
   Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

 
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