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Let it |
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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 360New Orleans |
Let it rain, let it pour Oh forever more Let it flood, soak to the core I know that it is such a chore Yet the kiss of life is oh so pleasing The caress of life is oh so easing So teach me your music, give me the beat I'll keep up with song, so let us meet Upon the mountain tops We feel the rain drops So gently kissing Hold my hand tighter My heart feels lighter The sky turns brighter Oh forever more, Forever more. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." Oscar Wilde |
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nehematala Member
since 2009-05-21
Posts 129 |
This is really good I love the feel The number one thing in acting is honesty: If you can fake that you've got it made. |
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Leanne <3 Member
since 2007-08-25
Posts 216N.S.W, Australia |
it sounds so carefree, i love it! |
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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 360New Orleans |
Thank you for the responses. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." Oscar Wilde |
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priyanka Member
since 2009-06-15
Posts 216india |
ah! so dreamy...so joyful...so carefree... so picturesque too... "forever more" gets me dreaming... |
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priyanka Member
since 2009-06-15
Posts 216india |
Got me reading too!! again |
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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 360New Orleans |
Sorry, didnt even check on these poems  Thank you so much! |
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precious pearls Member
since 2009-07-24
Posts 110NJ; United States |
beautiful!!! made me feel all lovey dovey inside lol great poem Always, |
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