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XxForever.BrokenxX
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~for one of my best friends.
One silent September,
the snow began to fall.
Chilling the air,
freezing time.

Standing in the meadow,
tears begin to drop.
Letting the world know,
opening blinded eyes.

Now the sorrow has been remembered,
the flowers can start to wilt.
People will walk away,
living their lives in memories.
And forgetting the one you tried to create.
{~~*~~}


Lacrimosa Dies Illa
[Oh that tearful day]
    {~~*~~}

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crosscountry83
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1 posted 08-03-2009 12:49 AM       View Profile for crosscountry83   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for crosscountry83

Wow, wonderful write.  Sounded deep and melancholy, kind of more sad than melancholy.  You had great imagery and a fluid tone, keep it up.

Rileigh
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Aww Emily!! I haven't talked to you in forever. How's everything going?

Ths poem is really good. I'm putting it in my library.

Hope things are well,

-Zach
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No one's memory is ever forgotten as long as some tender mark is left on the world.

A soul is in the speech and tears of those who love us.

Love and hugs, Luke.
Leanne <3
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absolutely loved it!
XxForever.BrokenxX
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Thank you all for reading.

{~~*~~}


Lacrimosa Dies Illa
[Oh that tearful day]
    {~~*~~}
crimsonXnails
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you're welcome

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

 
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