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She who turned on me

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LoveAbounds
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0 posted 08-01-2009 11:44 AM       View Profile for LoveAbounds   Email LoveAbounds   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveAbounds

Who is the one who played with me,
but she who shortly turned on me?
What history had we since then,
but conflict until now?

When I in anger gathered those,
who I established as her foes,
did I not openly await,
a peaceful end of war?

What meaning had her shutting doors,
when peace abounded all the more?
and why were they only unlocked,
when I was unaware?

Don't tell me it's a hopeless case,
would all my future this girl waste?
Is there no chance for us to share,
and both our strengths combine?

"For God has not given us the spirit of fear, but of love, and of power, and of a sound mind." - 2 Timothy 1:7

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crosscountry83
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1 posted 08-02-2009 02:25 PM       View Profile for crosscountry83   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for crosscountry83

Hey, Welcome to pip.  I'm a new member too hehe, just joined a few days ago.  The poem was wonderful, it looked like it came directly from the heart.  I look forward to more poems from you.
Excellent job

Rileigh aka crosscountry83
nehematala
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2 posted 08-02-2009 05:06 PM       View Profile for nehematala   Email nehematala   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nehematala

this is really good

The number one thing in acting is honesty: If you can fake that you've got it made.

 
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