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the night i died twice

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Clockwork_Orange
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i am my own worst enemy
i swear im my own downfall
everyone knows but they'll never say
the words wont come at all

sticks and stones can break your bones
yes, they really can
but what happens to your soul
when you really get out of hand

today i thought i was going to die
in a bathroom of all places
wishing to God before i go
please just help me make it

no more, no more i scream at them
but the voices never stop
i cant control what ive done
this was never the plot

im a waste of human tissue
im a failure at this life
ive done nothing but mess up
in my 18 years of life

and this is not a plea for help
i know im already gone
lying on this bathroom floor
i cant hold on for long

~ you cant run from yourself ~

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crosscountry83
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1 posted 07-30-2009 03:08 PM       View Profile for crosscountry83   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for crosscountry83

Wow, this was really deep.  It's hard for me to relate, maybe that's a good thing... but your poem gives me understanding.  Keep writing poetry, it's really good!
RevengeIsMine
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Loved it.. More than you could ever possibly imagine.. keep your head up hunni.. mwahsssss xxx
 
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