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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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0 posted 07-30-2009 05:54 AM       View Profile for N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet   Email N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet


On a wall of talent.

In a river of genius.

A endless flow.

Just so you know, it's like watching a show, full of people better then me far as I can see, better to be the one standing on the outside. Inside. I died. No one cried, no one sighed. Follow the road, endless flow. Society laws we abide, cross the line the law you collide. Don't touch. 4:38 in the mornin' can't sleep, got a plane to catch at 3. New fam. New Plan. Mess it up again, repeat the sin. Again and again. I promised I wouldn't, know that I shouldn't. Guess it's just me. If someones gotta judge, let it be thee.

Broken heart? Got that. Give me a stage and I'll show you where the suns at.

Disrespect me? I'll show you where the guns at. Figuratively and emotionally, secretively I hope for my own failure.

Pretend that I can do so much better.

Hold my hand and we'll walk. Guide you through the bush and we'll talk.

Stare into mine, I'll stare unto yours. For the abyss may be full of fire, the soul burning of desire. For the abyss may hold my breath, wish the death of what we birth.

The angles may smile, the daemons may smirk. The angles may cry, the daemons may lurk.

Let 'em whisper in my ear, let 'em fill you full of fear. I'll always look to the heavens in disparate vain. Let the light soak through my heart of black stain.

Yet I dance with the devil, fight with the daemons. My home is in the abyss, on the layer of the fifth.
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crosscountry83
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1 posted 07-30-2009 04:04 PM       View Profile for crosscountry83   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for crosscountry83

Another one of your poems! I think you are a really good author.  I'm guessing that it makes more sense to you than it does to anyone else, i think that's just how poetry is.  Nice work!
priyanka
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2 posted 10-04-2009 05:48 PM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

you've got great talent...
wonderful thoughts

library!
Assassin_of_Verse
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3 posted 10-04-2009 10:41 PM       View Profile for Assassin_of_Verse   Email Assassin_of_Verse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Assassin_of_Verse

Your rhymes remind me of those by Tablo from Epik High, a great rapper, and (in my opinion) one of the best writers I've ever seen.

Great job!

There is power in the pen.

priyanka
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4 posted 10-10-2009 04:36 PM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

Got me some time to read and came back for a second helping...
You just wow me with this one!!
Such flow...
Such words!!
I'm jealous now!!
priyanka
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5 posted 10-10-2009 04:38 PM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

Got meself some time
So came back for a second helping...
Such flow...
Such words!!
Ah! I'm truly jealous!!
N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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6 posted 10-14-2009 12:22 AM       View Profile for N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet   Email N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet

Thank you!

You're too kind
 
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