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0 posted 07-29-2009 11:45 AM       View Profile for Clockwork_Orange   Email Clockwork_Orange   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Clockwork_Orange's Home Page   View IP for Clockwork_Orange

today i think i just lost everything
all we've said and thought and dreamed and made

and through the hallway i still see you there
past the shadows and the empty air

any second you will walk right in
and i can plead that i was wrong agian

if it still keeps you here id steal a car
and we could drive away to the hills and stars

and maybe madison has the answers
but theres no telling if we never go

so pack your bags the time is getting late
the stations getting smaller as we head out of state

lets see the mountains or the rivers deep
lets pitch a tent but never sleep

let the fire burn out to only embers
and we can watch it burn to cinders

maybe madison has the answers
but we'll never know if we never go



~ you cant run from yourself ~

[This message has been edited by Clockwork_Orange (07-30-2009 02:17 PM).]

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1 posted 07-29-2009 01:13 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Great work, like usual. I liked the second stanza best.

-Zach
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2 posted 07-30-2009 02:25 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

I thought this was great, and the second stanza is the best.

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

 
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