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arabesque
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since 07-26-2009
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USA


0 posted 07-28-2009 09:07 PM       View Profile for arabesque   Email arabesque   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for arabesque

Through the hailing haze
Through the tragic end
You always kept me sane
You always acted like a friend

Our line was always definite
We were so positively sure
But something seemed to happen
Because the line began to blur

We used to be best friends
The kind that shared everything
Sleepovers, parties, adventures,
Secrets, nicknames, and a ring

Then you moved away
Both of us in tears
We called each other mostly
Sharing our new found fears

Then I found new friends
And you found a whole clique
We began to forget
How much we used to speak

I became the serious one
And you turned into a "prep"
We began to waver
And that was the first step

We never got into a fight
And Iím very proud of that
But whatís the point
When our friendship is so flat?

I want to pick up the phone
And always hear your voice
Telling me exciting gossip
Or a reason to rejoice

But I know that this is the end
Weíll never be the same
Though, I canít help but wonder
If I see you, will you even know my name?

Forever,
Arabesque<3

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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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since 07-30-2009
Posts 369
New Orleans


1 posted 07-30-2009 05:26 AM       View Profile for N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet   Email N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet

The callings of a heart are only repeated by the eyes and the tears of your soul. Beautifully captured.

-LostPoet
freeand2sexy
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since 09-12-2008
Posts 703
CA, USA


2 posted 07-30-2009 07:32 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Welcome to Pip!!!

I thought this was wonderful, I really liked it, and I can't wait to read more of your work.

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.
arabesque
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since 07-26-2009
Posts 14
USA


3 posted 08-02-2009 01:06 AM       View Profile for arabesque   Email arabesque   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for arabesque

Thank you both for reading!  

Forever,
Arabesque<3

nehematala
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since 05-21-2009
Posts 129


4 posted 08-03-2009 07:20 PM       View Profile for nehematala   Email nehematala   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nehematala

This is really good and so true

The number one thing in acting is honesty: If you can fake that you've got it made.

Leanne <3
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since 08-25-2007
Posts 217
N.S.W, Australia


5 posted 08-05-2009 01:46 AM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Leanne <3

its such a sad but common scenerio
i hope that you and you're friend are somehow reunited
loved the poem
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