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Not The Ordinary Girl Next Door

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Romanticy
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since 07-28-2009
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Florida, US


0 posted 07-28-2009 06:54 PM       View Profile for Romanticy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Romanticy

Your not just the ordinary girl next door,
You seem like your much more.

You say your a model simply amaizing,
Like a fire your body is simply blazing.

Your beauty is something special,
Its something on another level.

It gives me that little shine in my eyes,
Just like the sun rise.

If you ask me ill tell you unlike the other guys,
That im not asshamed to say that you give me butterflies.

I can picture us laying down looking up at the blue skys,
As the time flies by.

And as day turns to night,
The stars shine so bright.

It couldnt feel more right, as I look over to you and you look at me,

Its exactly how I want it to be...

.:Romanticy:.

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arabesque
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since 07-26-2009
Posts 14
USA


1 posted 07-28-2009 09:00 PM       View Profile for arabesque   Email arabesque   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for arabesque

Aww that's so cute   Very nice and sweet.

Forever,
Arabesque<3

freeand2sexy
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since 09-12-2008
Posts 703
CA, USA


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Welcome to Pip!!!

I like your first post.

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

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